I've added a critique request to this page, mainly because people DO keep looking at it and adding it as a favourite or image set, etc. And having made a better version, I'd just like to know why you all keep coming to this one. Maybe it's just me being too picky, but all I can see are faults in it.
Anyway thanks for stopping by.
All the best for 2012.
Andy
PS. As people seem to like this I've decided if it ever reaches 1000 favourites I'll finish it off.
I like this font a lot, and I can easily picture this font in many different drawings that I have seen. The way you made the lines thicker and thinner really works with the letters. I think that this is very well done.
However, I think that all the swirls and curves make it a bit hard for the reader(?) to tell which letters are which, like the uppercase P and L.
The lowercase letters seem to be shadowed by the uppercase. They don't seem as creative as the uppercase and look kind of like a second thought to me.
Other than that, I have no problems with it. I love it!
Beloved is a beautiful font - it's imperfect curves (or faults!), variety of flourishes and wild abandon leave you with the warm feeling of first love...
When I see this font, I can easily imagine lovers running barefoot on a breezy beach in filmy clothing, having a picnic in a warm flowery meadow, dancing in the rain, or a lazy evening with nothing but a bottle of wine and a sunset.
If I would suggest something, it would be to have a set where the lowercase flourishes are optional, so that it would look more realistic in a letter form. (and numbers of course)
Such a "fierce met by sophistication" font, perfect to match its users personality. I would be personally honored to display this artists work to promote our charity Guns For Hoses, which all proceeds go to the National Fallen Firefighters Foundation. This font has the perfect personality we r looking for when designing sites and advertisement if you would like to donate your font or work something out so that we may display your art on our our charity. Please feel free to email me at gunsforhoses@hotmail.com for more information on our charity. Thank you for your possible interest in working together in the near future.
~Mandy Rocke Guns for Hoses-Founder gunsforhoses@hotmail.com [link]
Just my two cents, but I think the reason this might be viewed and +fav so much, is because it shows up in results for fonts, before your others. (which probably has to do with the large number of views, so it's kind of a self sustaining cycle)
And it is a great font. So that helps!
Either way, keep up the great work, and I'm off to view the rest of your work.
yes, there are a lot of faults with it. however, the appeal is, in part, the faults. it looks hand written, it looks vintage, it FLOWS. Im not sure which of these i like better, honestly, the old or new one. the newer version looks too perfect, like a computer designed and generated it, while this font is a work of art.... all handmade with passion that real artists have deep in their soul. the new one is lovely, it's perfect for wedding invitations or another formal occasion, where this font is perfect for "handwritten" letters to someone you love. something personal.
However, I think that all the swirls and curves make it a bit hard for the reader(?) to tell which letters are which, like the uppercase P and L.
The lowercase letters seem to be shadowed by the uppercase. They don't seem as creative as the uppercase and look kind of like a second thought to me.
Other than that, I have no problems with it. I love it!
When I see this font, I can easily imagine lovers running barefoot on a breezy beach in filmy clothing, having a picnic in a warm flowery meadow, dancing in the rain, or a lazy evening with nothing but a bottle of wine and a sunset.
If I would suggest something, it would be to have a set where the lowercase flourishes are optional, so that it would look more realistic in a letter form. (and numbers of course)
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